Fantastic Book Review

 

I do not have many book reviews on Amazon, but not because I haven't sold a lot books; it's just that Amazon doesn't allow a book to be reviewed unless it was purchased from Amazon. Nevertheless, I am eternally grateful and humbled by the wonderful reviews I have received. 

Reviewed in Australia on January 28, 2026

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Vanguard is a fantasy story namely about a naïve boy named Wajue. His world falls apart after he and his father is attacked by a monstrous bear and when tragedy strikes, leaving him injured and fighting for survival, he finds himself brought away from the safety of his hidden homeland and into the unforgiving land of Bovatha. Saved and healed by a mysterious half-elf woman who inadvertently brings down a fate upon him that was set since the day of his birth, Wajue must navigate a world filled with things he is truly unaccustomed to or understands - deceit and greed - and as he discovers more about himself, his companions and the world he is now part of, danger surrounds him.

The Good

Vanguard is surprisingly brutal. No character is safe, and the writer has the incredible ability to introduce you to many characters unique and likable before ending their lives. Some die of old age while others meet their demise suddenly in an attack. The most haunting was so unforeseen it was jarring, and at the hands of the Wajue himself - although through possession.

The narrative is compelling drawing you deeply into the worlds history and lore, and not shy to take the time to explain historic significance without falling into the pitfall of lore dumps. Kafka is skilled at writing dialogue and inner monologue and at times making me chuckle, especially when he describes men's thoughts on why some female characters act the way they do. What is highlighted is his ability to create complex characters’ ones that truly stay with you, even if they only remain for a few pages he takes the time to make you want to interact with them more, making their loss more heartbreaking.

The Bad

I don't really have much criticism. I have two more books within the series to read and I can see that Kafka has taken the time with editing and formatting. Even though the writing was fantastic and well thought out there were several part (namely Wajue's possession) that came out of nowhere and I was shocked the sudden transition of murder of his companion.

Overall

The Vanguard is a fantastic example of the quality you would find in an indie title. Why his work has not been picked up by a traditional publisher is beyond me but the setting, characters and the overall writing was a joy to read.

Wajue is the MVP of this tale and I haven't really had a main character whom I liked more than any other supporting character. His innocence is endearing with his ability as a warrior. Janus however is a close second and I love the relationship between the two. I was very surprised by her backstory.

If you have a love for a fantasy setting and enjoy a great beginning for a multi-book saga, Vanguard (Broke Fiction Book 1) is for you and I can't recommend it enough.

j/k